ext_2961 ([identity profile] vsee.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] rat_jam 2007-03-30 02:30 pm (UTC)

Re: Frozen, due South, Victoria, 'Fire', G.

Chilling and fascinating look at Victoria. I hadn't really ever considered the shooting from her perspective before, and your description of the moment he pushes forward in her arms as he's struck, then Victoria pushing him away just stunned me. I just never even thought of that before. Wow.

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