ext_12440 ([identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] rat_jam 2007-04-04 08:25 pm (UTC)

Re: All the World's a Stage, RPF, Paul Gross/Martha Burns(/CKR), audience, NC-17

holy crap, that's just meltingly, mind-numbingly HOT. I can TOTALLY see Paul and Martha both having an audience kink, and I LOVE the easy way you build the tension between them - you can SEE how hot they are for each other, even now, and you capture that here. And this:

She's all but naked, and Callum is eating her with his eyes.

"Open your eyes," Paul whispers, and drops his hand to her belly, fingering her clit. "Look."


God. I fucking LOVE this.

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